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With growing population in cities, more and more people live in homes with small or no outdoor areas. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
解析&审题
题材：城市生活
题型：双边讨论（推荐）
关键词：growing population（人口增长）+ homes with no outdoor areas（没有室外空间）
复现情况：新题
随着城市人口越来越多，现在人们不能像以前一样，住着带着大大花园的房子。本题要求考生对这个现象进行利弊分析。
很多烤鸭可能会使用一边倒来处理这个题目。比如，认为这个现象当然是不好的：没有花园，就没有空间从事一些与工作无关的休闲活动，只能在屋子里看电视，这对人的身心都不利；此外，没有空间，就势必减少很多社交的机会，这会导致人与人之间的隔阂和孤独。这样写未必不可，表达好了也是好作文。但唐老师想提醒一下，本题还有一个关键词，即growing population，前面的观点没有涉及这个关键词，因此建议分类双边讨论，即除了以上讨论的负面影响外，还讨论一下其产生的正面影响：没有室外空间，就节约了地方，可以建更多楼房，解决不断增长的人口带来的住房压力。最后的结论就是：室外空间小了，对个人而言是不利的，但对于整个城市居民的生活而言，则是有利的。
1月16日雅思大作文真题参考范文
老师笔记
01、People used to live in houses with huge outdoor areas like a garden or backyard, but this is no longer possible for many people as a result of the relentless development ofurbanisation. For individual city dwellers, this trend is not a good one, though for the city as a whole, it is positive.
人们过去住在有花园或后院等巨大户外区域的房子里，但由于城市化的不断发展，这对许多人来说已经不可能了。对于城市居民个人来说，这一趋势并不好，尽管对于整个城市来说，这是积极的。
解析
（1） 本段利用对比的方法提出问题，然后直接给出自己的观点。
（2） As a result of 由于......
（3） Relentless 无情的
（4） Urbanisation 城镇化
02、With dwindled outdoor areas, people will find themselves confined to the limited number of indoor activities. If in the past they were able to engage in such activities as walking, gardening, weeding, and planting in their backyard, when they got back home from work, now what people can do is sitting in the sofa and watching TV. While being detrimental to their physical health, this will also make their life untolerably boring, especially for those who love to take care of flowers and plants or to take outdoor exercises.
随着室外区域的减少，人们会发现自己局限于有限的室内活动。如果过去下班回家后，他们能在后院从事散步、园艺、除草、种树等活动，现在人们能做的就是坐在沙发上看电视。这在不利于他们身体健康的同时，也会让他们的生活变得难以忍受的枯燥，尤其是那些喜欢照料花草或户外运动的人。
解析
（1） 本段论证室外空间减少带来的坏的影响之一：活动减少带来身体问题。
（2） Dwindle 减少；变小
（3） Be confined to... 被局限于......
（4） Engage in 从事
03、Worse still, without enough outdoor spaces, people will not be able to find many opportunities to interact with each other. They will spend most of their off-work time isolated in their match-box of homes. As this goes on, they will grow more and more lonely and indifferent to their neighbors. This lack of soical life may result in many mental problems.
更糟糕的是，如果没有足够的户外空间，人们将无法找到许多相互交流的机会。他们大部分的下班时间都会被隔离在火柴盒般的家里。这样下去，他们会越来越孤独，对邻居越来越漠不关心。缺乏社会生活可能会导致许多精神问题。
解析
（1） 本段讨论户外空间减少的另一个问题：导致互相隔离。
（2） Isolate 隔离
（3） Match-box of homes 火柴盒般的家
（4） Result in 导致
04、The disappearing outdoor space will do harm to the individual city dwellers both physically and psychologically, but it is necessary for the overall urban development. As more and more poeple rush into the cities, the government will have to address their housing and traffic issues. By reducing the outdoor areas, the government can build more houses and roads so as to meet the basic demands of all people.
户外空间的消失会对城市居民个体的身心健康造成危害，但这是城市整体发展的需要。随着越来越多的人涌入城市，单位将不得不解决他们的住房和交通问题。通过减少室外空间，单位可以建造更多的房屋和道路，以满足所有人的基本需求。
解析
（1） 本段讨论减少户外空间对整个城市发展的必要性。
（2） Disappearing 逐渐消失的
（3） Overall 整体的
（4） Address 解决；应对
雅思高分范文
People used to live in houses with huge outdoor areas like a garden or backyard, but this is no longer possible for many people as a result of the relentless development of urbanisation. For individual city dwellers, this trend is not a good one, though for the city as a whole, it is positive.
With dwindled outdoor areas, people will find themselves confined to the limited number of indoor activities. If in the past they were able to engage in such activities as walking, gardening, weeding, and planting in their backyard, when they got back home from work, now what people can do is sitting in the sofa and watching TV. While being detrimental to their physical health, this will also make their life untolerably boring, especially for those who love to take care of flowers and plants or to take outdoor exercises.
Worse still, without enough outdoor spaces, people will not be able to find many opportunities to interact with each other. They will spend most of their off-work time isolated in their match-box of homes. As this goes on, they will grow more and more lonely and indifferent to their neighbors. This lack of soical life may result in many mental problems.
The disappearing outdoor space will do harm to the individual city dwellers both physically and psychologically, but it is necessary for the overall urban development. As more and more poeple rush into the cities, the government will have to address their housing and traffic issues. By reducing the outdoor areas, the government can build more houses and roads so as to meet the basic demands of all people.
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2019年6月1日雅思大作文题目：挽救动植物是否为时已晚?Human activities have negative effects on plant and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem. Others believe effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give your opinion. （2016/02/18）
雅思写作素材图
解析&审题
本题是2016年2月18日原题重现。
人类活动已经给动植物带来很多消极的影响，因此有人认为，我们现在才去保护动植物已经太晚了，而其他人则认为我们还可以采取有效措施来改进这种局面。
其实，双方都有道理。
一方面，人类已经在很大程度上破坏了自然生态环境，很多动植物都消失了；另一方面，我们的确又可以采取一些方法来补救，而且的确已经见到成效了。
最近，读到一则新闻，熊猫现在已经不是世界一级濒危动物了，这就是大家采取行动的结果。
接下来，给大家分享这篇雅思写作范文
7分范文
Human civilisation has largely destroyed the habitats of many plants and animals so that some species have disappeared entirely from the earth. This situation has caused a strong sense of pessimism among many people that it is already too late for us to do anything about it. Though people have enough reasons to hold this pessimistic view, I am still positive that we can save the situation by taking effective measures.
In the name of "development" and "civilisation", human beings have long ignored the interest of plants and animals. To build a city, for instance, they will not hesitate to cut all the trees in the area and erect numerous concrete buildings in their place. When the trees are gone, all the animals have to leave or die because they can no longer survive. As the urbanisation goes on ruthlessly throughout the world, plants and animals can find less and less space to live in. This situation is bad enough, and shows no positive sign of change.
Yet, this does not mean we are helpless. Though we can not stop the city from spreading altogether, we can create a favorable environment for plants and animals to thrive on. For example, in the center of the city, we can give large spaces for trees and other plants and leave animals living there the way they like. In fact, I have already seen that many cities are running this kind of special "animal parks" which imitate the natural habitats of plants and animals and do not allow people to intrude in. More important is, of course, that people should be educated to understand that human beings themselves would suffer if the entire ecological system were destroyed. Our own existence is so dependent on the plants and animals around us that if they die, we will die, too. With this understanding deep in mind, human beings will try their best to maintain a harmonious relationship with the natural world.
Over the past 5000 years of human development, we do have brought negative effects on plants and animals and the situation seems to be worsening. So, for the benefits of the nature and ourselves, we should act immediately. Though keeping balance between the natural protection and human development is never easy, we can always find a way out. It is never too late to take measures to change the situation, and the earlier, the better.
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雅思口语素材图
1、pull down 赚钱
She is pulling down a million a year. 她每年会挣100万美元。
2、stick out 露出来
Your shirt is sticking out. 你的衬衫露出来了。
3、pick up 心情好转
Her mood picked up a bit today. 她今天的心情好转了些。
4、blow up 生气
I blew up at my girlfriend and now she's not talking to me. 我对女朋友发了火，没想到她至今都没和我说话。
5、 grow on 逐渐喜欢
She has grown on me. 她越来越喜欢我了。
6、cut back 减少不健康食物的摄入
I've cut back on fatty foods. 我减少了油腻的食物。
7、 carry out 履行，遵守
Carry out your promise. 遵守你的承诺。
8、 hang over 担心
There are problems hanging over me. 我正担心一些问题。
9、work off 通过工作消除
She worked off her breakup. 她忘记了失恋的烦恼。
10、check over 仔细检查
I got my car checked over. 我把我的车自己检查了一遍。
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