下城区培森教育雅思培训
2019年8月31日雅思大作文题目:网络时代，我们还需要博物馆和艺术馆吗？Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will be not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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在现代社会，我们有了电脑，有了网络，可以在网上很方便地察看各种历史物件和艺术品，那么我们还需要博物馆和艺术展览馆吗？这个题目，各位烤鸭是不是觉得很熟悉？现在有一种观点，有了网络，我们简直无所不能，其他什么都不需要了：不需要去商店了，不需要博物馆了，不需要旅游了，不需要坐车去上班了，不需要学校了，不需要老师了......这些观点在雅思考试作文中都出现过，新航道雅思写作老师先带大家看看：
2018.4.21
People today can shop, work and communicate with others via the Internet. They don't need to do these face to face. Is it a positive or negative development?【不需要面对面交流了】
2016.8.4
Some people think it's necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries. However, other people think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen at TV and the Internet.Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion. 【不需要旅游了】
2014.10.18 / 2017. 10. 5
It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn about other cultures. We can learn from books, films and internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 【不需要旅游了】
2014.4.26
People can work and study on the Internet without going to school or the company. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages? 【不需要去上学，不需要去上班了】
2013.7.18
In modern society, it is possible to go shopping, work and communicate via the Internet without face-to-face contact with one another. To what extent do you think this is a positive or negative development? 【不需要去购物，去上班，面对面交流了】
2012.1.12
Some people think government should build public libraries in every town. Others believe it is a waste of money because we can get information via internet at home. Discuss both views. 【不需要图书馆了】
2010.12.4
Museums are getting less important, when people can have access to information on the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 【不需要博物馆了】
2010.5.15
Some people think that computers and the Internet are more important to a child's education than going to school. However, others believe that schools and teachers are essential for children to learn effectively. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 【不需要学校和老师了】
不难看出，这些题目有一个共同思维模式：有了网络（书、电视），我们就可以获取各种知识和信息，因此传统的那些知识和信息交流方式都可以抛弃了。
那么，就这类题目，我们应该看到双面性：一方面，现代信息科技的确丰富了我们信息获取的路径，让信息获取变得更加便捷容易，但是信息科技并不能取代学校、图书馆、博物馆，乃至旅游、购物，原因有三：（1）网络信息庞杂，来源不明，以讹传讹很多，因此不是很可靠(unreliable)；（2）网络信息零碎（fragmented)，流于肤浅（superficial)，因此不是很系统(systematic)；（3）网络毕竟是冷冰冰的技术，缺乏人与人交流的温度（warmth），而实地旅游、购物、上学、上班、去博物馆、图书馆会带来一种人际体验(interpersonal contact)，而人际体验是我们人生的重要组成部分(interpersonal contact is an important part of our life’s experience)。
以下请看雅思写作老师的高分范文。
老师笔记
Most museums and art galleries now have an online presence, but it can be argued that the virtualreproduction will never substitute the physical historical objects and works of art featured on exhibition.
现在，大多数博物馆和艺术馆在网上都能找到，但可以说，网上复制品永远不会取代展览中出现的实物历史文物和艺术品。
解析
（1） 本段先引出话题：我们在网上能看到博物馆和艺术馆；然后提出观点：这些网上的东西永远不会取代实物。
（2） Presence 存在；在场
（3） Virtual 虚拟的
（4） Reproduction 复制（品）
（5） Substitute 取代
Nowadays, there are numerous online projects aimed at making museums and art galleries more accessible by digitizing collections and uploading videos, photos, and other documents of culture and art, so that the Internet users can browse the digital spaces without having to physically visit these institutions. This is indeed a big advantage, since visiting museums and galleries in person takes time and money, particularly as it often involves traveling great distances.
今天有许多在线项目，旨在通过数字化收藏和上传视频、照片和其他文化和艺术文件，使博物馆和艺术馆更容易访问，这样，互联网用户就可以浏览数字空间，而不必亲自访问这些机构。这确实是一个很大的优势，因为亲自参观博物馆和艺术馆耗时耗钱，更因为经常需要长途旅行。
解析
（1） 本段论述网上访问博物馆和艺术馆的好处：节约时间金钱和精力。因为这个不是本文论述的重点，因此不必详细论证。
（2） Accessible 可以访问的
（3） Digitize 使数字化
（4） Browse 浏览
（5） Involve 包含；涉及
Yet this does not mean that public museums and art galleries will no longer be needed. In fact, despite the rise of the Internet, visiting brick-and-mortar museums and art galleries remains popular world-wide. While exhibitions on Web sites can look like the actual objects, there is nothing like seeing the real ones in physical buildings. In other words, browsing an online museum or gallery cannot matchthe live experience of feeling the place and emotionally being inspired.
然而，这并不意味着不再需要公共博物馆和艺术馆。事实上，尽管互联网的兴起，参观实体博物馆和美术馆在全球范围内仍然很流行。虽然网站上的展览可以看起来像实物，但没有什么比在实体建筑中看到真实的东西更好了。换句话说，浏览网上博物馆或艺术馆与现场体验一个地方并得到心灵震动相比，是不可同日而语的。
解析
（1） 本段讨论现场参观博物馆和艺术馆的优点之一：现场感受更强烈。
（2） Brick-and-mortar 实体的
（3） Match 与......匹配
（4） The live experience 现场体验
（5） Inspire 启发；给.......灵感
Besides, information acquired from the Internet may be incomplete or even mistaken, reflecting only the perspectives or attitudes of people who give the information. You may feel frustrated, for example, when you try to find out how Terra Cotta Warriors look like from behind since all pictures online only show their faces.
此外，从互联网上获得的信息可能是不完整的，甚至可能是错误的，只反映了提供信息的人的视角或态度。比如，你试图发现从背后看兵马俑的样子时，你会感到很沮丧，因为网上所有的照片都是兵马俑的正面照。
解析
（1） 本段讨论现场参观博物馆和艺术馆的原因之二：自己看更全面。本段用例证法。
（2） Mistaken 错误的
（3） Perspective 视角；角度
In conclusion, even when people can pay a virtual visit to museums and art galleries, they still need to go to the real ones in order to obtain the valuable personal experience and avoid being misled by the information online.
总之，即使人们可以在网上参观博物馆和艺术馆，他们仍然需要去真正的博物馆和艺术馆，这样才能获得宝贵的个人体验，同时避免被网上信息所误导。
解析
（1）本段结论，并再次明确自己的观点。
（2）Pay a virtual visit to... 网上访问/参观......
（3）Valuable 宝贵的
7分范文
Most museums and art galleries now have an online presence, but it can be argued that the virtual reproduction will never substitute the physical historical objects and works of art featured on exhibition.
Nowadays, there are numerous online projects aimed at making museums and art galleries more accessible by digitizing collections and uploading videos, photos, and other documents of culture and art, so that the Internet users can browse the digital spaces without having to physically visit these institutions. This is indeed a big advantage, since visiting museums and galleries in person takes time and money, particularly as it often involves traveling great distances.
Yet this does not mean that public museums and art galleries will no longer be needed. In fact, despite the rise of the Internet, visiting brick-and-mortar museums and art galleries remains popular world-wide. While exhibitions on Web sites can look like the actual objects, there is nothing like seeing the real ones in physical buildings. In other words, browsing an online museum or gallery cannot match the live experience of feeling the place and emotionally being inspired.
Besides, information acquired from the Internet may be incomplete or even mistaken, reflecting only the perspectives or attitudes of people who give the information. You may feel frustrated, for example, when you try to find out how Terra Cotta Warriors look like from behind since all pictures online only show their faces.
In conclusion, even when people can pay a virtual visit to museums and art galleries, they still need to go to the real ones in order to obtain the valuable personal experience and avoid being misled by the information online.
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建议背诵的句子
1. Most museums and art galleries now have an online presence, but it can be argued that the virtual reproduction will never substitute the physical historical objects and works of art featured on exhibition.
现在，大多数博物馆和艺术馆在网上都能找到，但可以说，网上复制品永远不会取代展览中出现的实物历史文物和艺术品。
2. Nowadays, there are numerous online projects aimed at making museums and art galleries more accessible by digitizing collections and uploading videos, photos, and other documents of culture and art, so that the Internet users can browse the digital spaces without having to physically visit these institutions.
今天有许多在线项目，旨在通过数字化收藏和上传视频、照片和其他文化和艺术文件，使博物馆和艺术馆更容易访问，这样，互联网用户就可以浏览数字空间，而不必亲自访问这些机构。
3. While exhibitions on Web sites can look like the actual objects, there is nothing like seeing the real ones in physical buildings.
虽然网站上的展览可以看起来像实物，但没有什么比在实体建筑中看到真实的东西更好了。
4. Besides, information acquired from the Internet may be incomplete or even mistaken, reflecting only the perspectives or attitudes of people who give the information.
此外，从互联网上获得的信息可能是不完整的，甚至可能是错误的，只反映了提供信息的人的视角或态度。
5. In conclusion, even when people can pay a virtual visit to museums and art galleries, they still need to go to the real ones in order to obtain the valuable personal experience and avoid being misled by the information online.
总之，即使人们可以在网上参观博物馆和艺术馆，他们仍然需要去真正的博物馆和艺术馆，这样才能获得宝贵的个人体验，同时避免被网上信息所误导。
下城区培森教育雅思培训
雅思四个评分标准中的Lexical Resource（词汇资源） 考察的就是文章中词汇的使用情况，即考生的词汇量。那么在背单词，扩充词汇量的基础上，考生应该如何在考试时体现自己的词汇水平呢? 今天就和大家来谈一下提高lexical resource 评分的几个方法。
雅思写作
一：同义词替换
英文写作当中非常忌讳同一个词重复地出现，大家可以观察到在许多高分文章当中同一种事物作者会使用很多不同的方法表达，那么这种同义词替换的方法既可以体现作者的单词量，也会让文章显得更丰富。那么下面就一篇大作文为例:
在这篇教育类的文章中，我们可以看一下“决定学生的专业”这一说法的各种表达形式：
题目：Some people think that the government should decide which subjects students should study at the university, while others think that students should be allowed to apply for the subject they prefer. Discuss the two views and give your opinion.
（一些人认为单位应该决定大学生的专业，但也有些人认为学生应该按照自己的喜好选择专业。给出你的观点）
Some people support the idea of letting government decide what students’ curriculum should be while others argue it should be left to the students to decide.
Though there is indeed benefit if government were to have the final say in choosing a major, I believe students are entitled to arrange their studyindependently.
Lastly, as the majority of the education funds are provided by the government, it should have a say in what the student will be learning.
Most importantly, a student knows his interest and ambition the best, which makes him the most capable person topick the right subjects.
可以看到上面的这个文章中的“大学专业”这一词用了各种不同的方式表达了出来，除了题目中的subject，还可以用：
major
discipline
what students are learning
what is in the curriculum
study
因此在考试时，考生的思维应该更加活络，采用多种写法来描述同一事物。
二：合成词
在英语里，合成词指的是把两个或多个单词中的一部分混合后组成的新词语，这种构词方式在现代英语中尤为常见。
比如：
“vlog 视频博客”来自单词“video 视频”和“blog 博客”；
单词 “brunch 早午餐”从“breakfast 早餐”和“lunch 午餐”演变而来。
虽然这类词语最早常出现在网络平台上，但现在许多受欢迎的合成词也已经被纳入辞典当中，成为正式词汇。在英文写作当中可以根据需要灵活的组织词汇，使用复合词。如常用的复合词有：
ready-made 现成的
state-of-the-art 的
well-known 的
hard-working 努力的
good-looking 好看的
breath-taking 令人屏息的
grown-up 成年人
newlyweds 新婚夫妇
heart-broken 伤心的
takeaway 外卖
除此之外，我们还可以根据具体语境来合成词语，如 “单位选择的专业”可以说表述为“subjects that are chosen by government”或者“government-chosen subjects” 。
使用合成词会令句子更简单，层次也更丰富。使用合成词可以使句子更简单，如：
Australia is a country which speaks English = Australia is an English-speaking country. 澳大利亚是英语国家
people who love peace = peace-loving people 爱好和平的人民
a young man who looks good = a good-looking young man 帅哥
eterprises which are owned by state = state-owned enterprises 国企
三：使用准确的词语
词语的准确性也是影响lexical resource的一个重要因素。有许多意思相近的词用起来表示的意义却是不一样的。
如经济价值一般是economic value 而不是financial value，虽然financial和economic都有表示经济的意思。
除此之外，由于英文中有许多词是从一个词根衍生而来，因此许多词意思相近，拼写也相近，用起来确实不一样的。必须要准确掌握每个词的意思，才能在考试中从容地使用。
如拉丁语中的“bas”一词指低的，基础的，英文中有许多相关的衍生词：
base， 名词，表示基本。
There was a cycle path running along this side of the wall, right at its base.
在墙的这边，沿着墙根有一条自行车道。
basis， 名词，指抽象意义上的基础。
We're going to be meeting there on a regular basis.
我们将定期在那里会面。
basement ，名词，地下室或者基地。
They bought an old schoolhouse to live in and built a workshop in thebasement.
他们买了一处老校舍当住房，然后在地下室里建了一个作坊。
basic，形容词，基本的。
One of the most basic requirements for any form of angling is a sharp hook.
不管以什么方式钓鱼，有一个锋利的鱼钩都是最基本的要求之一。
以上就是本次总结的提高lexical resource评分的几个需要注意的方面，希望大家以后在写作练习中能够多多注意，并进行应用，拿到理想的分数。以上这些都是语意中含有“基本”这一意义的词，如果在文章中使用产生了混淆，无疑会给考官造成考生对词汇运用不佳的印象. 更多关于雅思的资讯与详情，可咨询广州新航道在线老师。
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