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2019年8月31日雅思大作文题目:网络时代,我们还需要博物馆和艺术馆吗?Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will be not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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在现代社会,我们有了电脑,有了网络,可以在网上很方便地察看各种历史物件和艺术品,那么我们还需要博物馆和艺术展览馆吗?这个题目,各位烤鸭是不是觉得很熟悉?现在有一种观点,有了网络,我们简直无所不能,其他什么都不需要了:不需要去商店了,不需要博物馆了,不需要旅游了,不需要坐车去上班了,不需要学校了,不需要老师了......这些观点在雅思考试作文中都出现过,新航道雅思写作老师先带大家看看:
2018.4.21
People today can shop, work and communicate with others via the Internet. They don't need to do these face to face. Is it a positive or negative development?【不需要面对面交流了】
2016.8.4
Some people think it's necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries. However, other people think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen at TV and the Internet.Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion. 【不需要旅游了】
2014.10.18 / 2017. 10. 5
It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn about other cultures. We can learn from books, films and internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 【不需要旅游了】
2014.4.26
People can work and study on the Internet without going to school or the company. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages? 【不需要去上学,不需要去上班了】
2013.7.18
In modern society, it is possible to go shopping, work and communicate via the Internet without face-to-face contact with one another. To what extent do you think this is a positive or negative development? 【不需要去购物,去上班,面对面交流了】
2012.1.12
Some people think government should build public libraries in every town. Others believe it is a waste of money because we can get information via internet at home. Discuss both views. 【不需要图书馆了】
2010.12.4
Museums are getting less important, when people can have access to information on the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 【不需要博物馆了】
2010.5.15
Some people think that computers and the Internet are more important to a child's education than going to school. However, others believe that schools and teachers are essential for children to learn effectively. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 【不需要学校和老师了】
不难看出,这些题目有一个共同思维模式:有了网络(书、电视),我们就可以获取各种知识和信息,因此传统的那些知识和信息交流方式都可以抛弃了。
那么,就这类题目,我们应该看到双面性:一方面,现代信息科技的确丰富了我们信息获取的路径,让信息获取变得更加便捷容易,但是信息科技并不能取代学校、图书馆、博物馆,乃至旅游、购物,原因有三:(1)网络信息庞杂,来源不明,以讹传讹很多,因此不是很可靠(unreliable);(2)网络信息零碎(fragmented),流于肤浅(superficial),因此不是很系统(systematic);(3)网络毕竟是冷冰冰的技术,缺乏人与人交流的温度(warmth),而实地旅游、购物、上学、上班、去博物馆、图书馆会带来一种人际体验(interpersonal contact),而人际体验是我们人生的重要组成部分(interpersonal contact is an important part of our life’s experience)。
以下请看雅思写作老师的高分范文。
老师笔记
Most museums and art galleries now have an online presence, but it can be argued that the virtualreproduction will never substitute the physical historical objects and works of art featured on exhibition.
现在,大多数博物馆和艺术馆在网上都能找到,但可以说,网上复制品永远不会取代展览中出现的实物历史文物和艺术品。
解析
(1) 本段先引出话题:我们在网上能看到博物馆和艺术馆;然后提出观点:这些网上的东西永远不会取代实物。
(2) Presence 存在;在场
(3) Virtual 虚拟的
(4) Reproduction 复制(品)
(5) Substitute 取代
Nowadays, there are numerous online projects aimed at making museums and art galleries more accessible by digitizing collections and uploading videos, photos, and other documents of culture and art, so that the Internet users can browse the digital spaces without having to physically visit these institutions. This is indeed a big advantage, since visiting museums and galleries in person takes time and money, particularly as it often involves traveling great distances.
今天有许多在线项目,旨在通过数字化收藏和上传视频、照片和其他文化和艺术文件,使博物馆和艺术馆更容易访问,这样,互联网用户就可以浏览数字空间,而不必亲自访问这些机构。这确实是一个很大的优势,因为亲自参观博物馆和艺术馆耗时耗钱,更因为经常需要长途旅行。
解析
(1) 本段论述网上访问博物馆和艺术馆的好处:节约时间金钱和精力。因为这个不是本文论述的重点,因此不必详细论证。
(2) Accessible 可以访问的
(3) Digitize 使数字化
(4) Browse 浏览
(5) Involve 包含;涉及
Yet this does not mean that public museums and art galleries will no longer be needed. In fact, despite the rise of the Internet, visiting brick-and-mortar museums and art galleries remains popular world-wide. While exhibitions on Web sites can look like the actual objects, there is nothing like seeing the real ones in physical buildings. In other words, browsing an online museum or gallery cannot matchthe live experience of feeling the place and emotionally being inspired.
然而,这并不意味着不再需要公共博物馆和艺术馆。事实上,尽管互联网的兴起,参观实体博物馆和美术馆在全球范围内仍然很流行。虽然网站上的展览可以看起来像实物,但没有什么比在实体建筑中看到真实的东西更好了。换句话说,浏览网上博物馆或艺术馆与现场体验一个地方并得到心灵震动相比,是不可同日而语的。
解析
(1) 本段讨论现场参观博物馆和艺术馆的优点之一:现场感受更强烈。
(2) Brick-and-mortar 实体的
(3) Match 与......匹配
(4) The live experience 现场体验
(5) Inspire 启发;给.......灵感
Besides, information acquired from the Internet may be incomplete or even mistaken, reflecting only the perspectives or attitudes of people who give the information. You may feel frustrated, for example, when you try to find out how Terra Cotta Warriors look like from behind since all pictures online only show their faces.
此外,从互联网上获得的信息可能是不完整的,甚至可能是错误的,只反映了提供信息的人的视角或态度。比如,你试图发现从背后看兵马俑的样子时,你会感到很沮丧,因为网上所有的照片都是兵马俑的正面照。
解析
(1) 本段讨论现场参观博物馆和艺术馆的原因之二:自己看更全面。本段用例证法。
(2) Mistaken 错误的
(3) Perspective 视角;角度
In conclusion, even when people can pay a virtual visit to museums and art galleries, they still need to go to the real ones in order to obtain the valuable personal experience and avoid being misled by the information online.
总之,即使人们可以在网上参观博物馆和艺术馆,他们仍然需要去真正的博物馆和艺术馆,这样才能获得宝贵的个人体验,同时避免被网上信息所误导。
解析
(1)本段结论,并再次明确自己的观点。
(2)Pay a virtual visit to... 网上访问/参观......
(3)Valuable 宝贵的
7分范文
Most museums and art galleries now have an online presence, but it can be argued that the virtual reproduction will never substitute the physical historical objects and works of art featured on exhibition.
Nowadays, there are numerous online projects aimed at making museums and art galleries more accessible by digitizing collections and uploading videos, photos, and other documents of culture and art, so that the Internet users can browse the digital spaces without having to physically visit these institutions. This is indeed a big advantage, since visiting museums and galleries in person takes time and money, particularly as it often involves traveling great distances.
Yet this does not mean that public museums and art galleries will no longer be needed. In fact, despite the rise of the Internet, visiting brick-and-mortar museums and art galleries remains popular world-wide. While exhibitions on Web sites can look like the actual objects, there is nothing like seeing the real ones in physical buildings. In other words, browsing an online museum or gallery cannot match the live experience of feeling the place and emotionally being inspired.
Besides, information acquired from the Internet may be incomplete or even mistaken, reflecting only the perspectives or attitudes of people who give the information. You may feel frustrated, for example, when you try to find out how Terra Cotta Warriors look like from behind since all pictures online only show their faces.
In conclusion, even when people can pay a virtual visit to museums and art galleries, they still need to go to the real ones in order to obtain the valuable personal experience and avoid being misled by the information online.
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建议背诵的句子
1. Most museums and art galleries now have an online presence, but it can be argued that the virtual reproduction will never substitute the physical historical objects and works of art featured on exhibition.
现在,大多数博物馆和艺术馆在网上都能找到,但可以说,网上复制品永远不会取代展览中出现的实物历史文物和艺术品。
2. Nowadays, there are numerous online projects aimed at making museums and art galleries more accessible by digitizing collections and uploading videos, photos, and other documents of culture and art, so that the Internet users can browse the digital spaces without having to physically visit these institutions.
今天有许多在线项目,旨在通过数字化收藏和上传视频、照片和其他文化和艺术文件,使博物馆和艺术馆更容易访问,这样,互联网用户就可以浏览数字空间,而不必亲自访问这些机构。
3. While exhibitions on Web sites can look like the actual objects, there is nothing like seeing the real ones in physical buildings.
虽然网站上的展览可以看起来像实物,但没有什么比在实体建筑中看到真实的东西更好了。
4. Besides, information acquired from the Internet may be incomplete or even mistaken, reflecting only the perspectives or attitudes of people who give the information.
此外,从互联网上获得的信息可能是不完整的,甚至可能是错误的,只反映了提供信息的人的视角或态度。
5. In conclusion, even when people can pay a virtual visit to museums and art galleries, they still need to go to the real ones in order to obtain the valuable personal experience and avoid being misled by the information online.
总之,即使人们可以在网上参观博物馆和艺术馆,他们仍然需要去真正的博物馆和艺术馆,这样才能获得宝贵的个人体验,同时避免被网上信息所误导。
课程小结
2018年01月13日雅思大作文题目
“ Some people believe that employers should not be concerned about the way their employees dress, but they should be concerned about the quality at work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
这道题考的是:在什么程度上你同意企业老板们不要在乎员工的着装问题,而是专注员工的工作品质。可以说这道题是近期雅思作文考试中比较新的一个题目了,
这个题目是要求同时论述着装和工作品质,如果你仅论述其中一个方面(工作品质或着装),则不完全符合题目要求,也就是在task response方面有欠缺。本题可以采用如下结构:
1. 引言段 提出话题.
2. 中段A The possible benefits of having a dress code as a corporate image, in relation to the quality of work 着装可能提高工作品质
3. 中段B. The possible drawbacks of having a dress code, in relation to the quality of work. 着装可能破坏工作品质
4. 结论段 A dress code is mixed with benefits and drawbacks, so it’s up to employers themselves to decide whether their employees should follow a strict dress code.
2018年1月13日雅思大作文着装
范文及解析:
Whether employers should be more concerned with their employees’ dressing manner or their work quality has become a heated topic in recent years.
雇主应否更关注雇员的着装方式或工作质素,已成为近年的热门话题。
解析:
(1)这是一个相当老套的开头法,但相当直接。
(2)be concerned about / with... 关注......; 关心......
(3)dressing manner 穿着方式
Some people believe that it is beneficial to have a dress code in the workplace, if only for image reasons. Workers may be asked to wear a uniform to communicatea corporate image and ensure that people easily identify them. This is particularly true to a workplace where employees have regular face-to-face contact with customers and clients. For this reason, nowadays an increasing number of workplaces prefer to set up a dress code and subtly promote the visual uniformity. While it is hard to determine how the visual uniformity is related to quality at work, having a dress code in place may help the way a corporation wants to beperceived.
有些人认为在工作场所有着装规范是有益的,哪怕仅仅是因为形象的原因。员工可能被要求穿着制服,以传达公司形象,并确保人们很容易识别他们。对于一个员工定期与顾客和客户进行面对面接触的工作场所来说,情况尤其如此。由于这个原因,现在越来越多的工作场所喜欢设置着装规范,巧妙地促进视觉统一性。虽然很难确定视觉统一性与工作质量有何关系,但设置着装规范可能会帮助公司希望被人感知的方式。
解析:
(1)本段论述着装规范对工作质量的好处:至少可以建立公司形象。写作时,需要确定每段写作的中心,然后围绕这个中心组织论据。
(2)dress code 着装标准/规范
(3)if only 即使仅仅是......
(4)communicate 传达;交流
(5)ensure 确保
(6)identify 识别
(7)for this reason 为了这个原因
(8)subtly 巧妙地
(9)uniformity 统一性
(10)perceive 感知;认识
However, some people think that having a strict dress code may actually affect the employees’ quality at work. One of its biggest downsides is that a strict dress code can stifle individuality since workers are not given total freedom to demonstratetheir personal styles. Sometimes employees complain that a dress code causes feelings of stress among themselves and consequently leads to lower effectiveness and efficiency at work.
然而,有些人认为严格的着装规定实际上会影响员工的工作质量。严格的着装规定的一个的缺点是它可能扼杀个性,因为员工没有充分的自由来展示他们的个人风格。有时,员工抱怨着装规范会导致他们之间的压力感,从而导致工作效度和效率的下降。
解析:
(1)本段讨论着装可能对工作效率的负面影响,讨论了两个方面:一是扼杀个性,二是增加压力。
(2)downside 缺陷;消极的方面
(3)stifle 扼杀
(4)individuality 个性
(5)demonstrate 展示
(6)consequently 结果;从而
In conclusion, employers should be concerned about the quality at work, but whether a dress code makes sense for a workplace is a question only employers can answer. With quality of work in mind, it is up to every employer to decide whether he should care about the way his employees should dress.
总之,雇主应该关心工作的质量,但着装规范是否对工作场所有意义是雇主才能回答的问题。只要把工作质量放在心里,是否应该关心员工该穿什么样的衣服,就由雇主自己来决定了。
解析:
(1)结论段,提出工作质量是位的,但员工到底该怎样衣着,无法确定,只能由雇主自己来决定。
(2)make sense 有意义
(3)with...in mind 记住......;把......放在心中
(4)it’s up to... 由......来决定
2018年1月13日雅思大作文范文:
Whether employers should be more concerned with their employees’ dressing manner or their work quality has become a heated topic in recent years.
Some people believe that it is beneficial to have a dress code in the workplace, if only for image reasons. Workers may be asked to wear a uniform to communicate a corporate image and ensure that people easily identify them. This is particularly true to a workplace where employees have regular face-to-face contact with customers and clients. For this reason, nowadays an increasing number of workplaces prefer to set up a dress code and subtly promote the visual uniformity. While it is hard to determine how the visual uniformity is related to quality at work, having a dress code in place may help the way a corporation wants to be perceived.
However, some people think that having a strict dress code may actually affect the employees’ quality at work. One of its biggest downsides is that a strict dress code can stifle individuality since workers are not given total freedom to demonstrate their personal styles. Sometimes employees complain that a dress code causes feelings of stress among themselves and consequently leads to lower effectiveness and efficiency at work.
In conclusion, employers should be concerned about the quality at work, but whether a dress code makes sense for a workplace is a question only employers can answer. With quality of work in mind, it is up to every employer to decide whether he should care about the way his employees should dress.
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