广州雅思6分培训

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导读很多时候，我们在雅思写作中想表达类似“xx度”或者“xx性”(比如：“契合度”、“匹配性”等)这样的意思。于是，我们会找一个或者造一个对等的名词或名词词组。其实，在雅思写作中，依赖这样的名词(或词组)很可能读起来蛮别扭的、蛮拧巴的。Instead，我们就干脆写明确了，读起来自然许多。

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很多时候，我们在雅思写作中想表达类似“xx度”或者“xx性”(比如：“契合度”、“匹配性”等)这样的意思。于是，我们会找一个或者造一个对等的名词或名词词组。其实，在雅思写作中，依赖这样的名词(或词组)很可能读起来蛮别扭的、蛮拧巴的。Instead，我们就干脆写明确了，读起来自然许多。

雅思7分

应对

Many of the world’s problems cannot be solved by individuals, and the only way to solve those problems is that our governments take actions.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

这个题目。

学生在写作的开头段落里有一句写到：

Two of the many problems are the environment and diseases.

这个句子看起来很不错。其实。。。

因为“主—系—表”表达的是对等关系，就要求主语和表语在逻辑上一致。这个句子中，作者建立的对等关系不合逻辑，因为环境本身并不是一个problem。当然，diseases做表语是合理的，但是，既然是和the environment在同一个句子里，那么，整个句子的逻辑还是有瑕疵的。

如何修改后提分?

看下面

教师修改后的句子：

One of the many problems is the environmental degradation, and the risk of a disease outbreak is another one.

看起来很简单的两个“主—系—表”的并列复合，其实很有说头：

首先，原句中的主语和表语逻辑概念不一致的问题被解决了。

2、两个“主—系—表”故意是颠倒的，于是句子的信息结构就不单调了。

3、上一个句子的表语和下一个句子的主语“靠近”，于是信息更紧凑，语流更好。

4、词汇(高亮标出了)。注意：outbreak可数。

总结：

语法合理只是写句子的形式合理，我们还需要注意逻辑合理呢。

最后广州新航道小编希望大家可以在雅思写作考试中取得满意的成绩。更多关于雅思考试的资讯与详情，可关注广州新航道雅思频道，或咨询广州新航道在线老师。

课程简介

考生经常会遇到雅思阅读填空中并列词考点，所谓并列词看起来不难但是大家还是不容疏忽，因为不常常有这方面的培训很多考生不知道如何运用并列词，今天广州新航道小编就来讲述下。

雅思阅读填空中并列词考点

对于雅思阅读填空中并列词考点，如果题目出现and，as well as等信号，表明这个是关于雅思阅读填空中并列词考点。首先，题目中如果遇到as well as的时候，考生需要知道的是as well as = and，我们可以从下面例子看出。

问题：Metacognition involves children understanding their own learning strategies, as well as developing .

上述例子，很多考生是不理解Metacognition这个单词的意思，其实遇到这种词汇，我们不需要了解意思，我们知道cognition是认知的意思，因此可以理解为某种认知。即翻译为这个认知需要孩子理解他们自己的学习策略和发展。

通常考生首先要明确雅思阅读填空中并列词考点，信号是as well as，说明learning strategies跟as well as developing关系是一致的。因此我们可以在原文章找到红字部分中包含的learning strategies确定答案位置，再从理解上发现Emotional awareness是答案。

前面讲到as well as在雅思阅读填空题中表示并列，此外逗号也可以表示并列关系中的and，即“,”= and.我们可以从下面的例子可以看出。

问题：Red leaves are most abundant when daytime weather conditions are and sunny.

上述题目翻译为当白天天气怎么样和有阳光，红叶就会变得很多。And表明是填空题中并列的考点。从原文标红处可以发现red colors are dry，sunny days这个关键词。正好切合上述所说“,”= and，因此这题的答案就是dry。我们再来看一个例子，也是关于句号等于and.

以上这些就是有关雅思阅读填空中并列词考点，希望同学们加强复习，争取在这部分中不要失分哦。

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广州雅思6分培训

有些童鞋备考雅思一直有种谜之自信，坚持自己对的就一定会直着冲，完全不会停下来总结错误、汲取经验。

保持拼劲和好心态去备考雅思固然很重要，但是切忌自我良好，切忌自我良好，切忌自我良好，重要的事情说三遍，扒一扒某些童鞋的写作备考血泪史。

刚开始备考写作，都是按着自己的套路来，于是也闹了不少笑话。应该有很多童鞋犯这样的错误，自己却没发现的。比如从开头段开始，我们就在5.5分的边缘试探：

Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family?

I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……

乍一看是不是没毛病，很符合我们的表达思维？还用上了所谓的“俚语”，殊不知已经犯了一个严重的错误，“Many sons, many lucks”正确写法应该是“Happiness lies in having many children”不敢想象考官在首段看到这神奇俗语时的表情。

在被指出这个错误的时候不敢轻易尝试中国俗语的翻译了，尽管有时候用得好会很加分。

严重的语法错误也是很多童鞋的软肋，自我感觉良好的一番表达下来，自己都不好意思面对这种错误：

Topic2-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished?

这道题是一道雅思真题，在非常重要的首段上犯语法错误，很显然会被扣分，对接下来考官对你的判断产生消极影响，大家随意感受以下语法错误百出的回答：
About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should.

以上还可能都是“肉眼可见”的错误，没具体到细节。接下来要细数在基本功上犯的错了。别笑，大家都有可能在这些地方踩雷。

我们都知道在表示举例子的时候，such as与like是完全等同的，如：Wild flowers such as/like orchids and primroses are becoming rare.但是很多小伙伴对于such as、for example 的把握还是不够准确。一般情况下接句子前者接词语表示举例子。于是就有了下面的写法：There is a similar word in many languages, such as in French and Italian.
这里的such as改为for example会更贴切，因为“in French and Italian”其实是“there is a similar word in French and Italian”的简化，所以要用for example 来引出例证。假如我们不去特别注意，根本不会发现这个小错误藏在句子里。

写到这里，如果将这些错误组合成一篇文章交给老师批改，已经一篇都是红色的圈圈叉叉了。还有很多错误就不（不忍心ORZ）细扒出来了，总结了来说，在写作的备考上，很多人都极有可能犯一些自己看不到的错误，如果不及时发现及时纠正就算练了很对篇都改变不了5.5的命运，这里将总结成三个建议：

1、反复修改，敢错敢改，不要做无用功
2、不要总自我感觉良好，敢于将备考的文章“晒”给老师批改
3、注意细节，写作的错误有时候靠自己很难抓得稳，还得靠合格的作文批改老师来帮我们批改，改过几次后，随着上面的红色圈圈叉叉越来越少，你的分数也就上来了。

如果你考试前都是自信满满，结果写作总拿5.5，苦战了几次后总是卡在写作上，或者考前狂练写作，效果却不不如意，那么可以通过批改来检测下自己的问题啦！

广州雅思6分培训

今天新航道小编分享最近的一篇雅思写作范文，就是1月16日雅思大作文真题参考范文 | 没有室外空间，好还是坏？下面我们一起来看看详细的解析与雅思高分范文吧！

With growing population in cities, more and more people live in homes with small or no outdoor areas. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

解析&审题

题材：城市生活

题型：双边讨论（推荐）

关键词：growing population（人口增长）+ homes with no outdoor areas（没有室外空间）

复现情况：新题

随着城市人口越来越多，现在人们不能像以前一样，住着带着大大花园的房子。本题要求考生对这个现象进行利弊分析。

很多烤鸭可能会使用一边倒来处理这个题目。比如，认为这个现象当然是不好的：没有花园，就没有空间从事一些与工作无关的休闲活动，只能在屋子里看电视，这对人的身心都不利；此外，没有空间，就势必减少很多社交的机会，这会导致人与人之间的隔阂和孤独。这样写未必不可，表达好了也是好作文。但唐老师想提醒一下，本题还有一个关键词，即growing population，前面的观点没有涉及这个关键词，因此建议分类双边讨论，即除了以上讨论的负面影响外，还讨论一下其产生的正面影响：没有室外空间，就节约了地方，可以建更多楼房，解决不断增长的人口带来的住房压力。最后的结论就是：室外空间小了，对个人而言是不利的，但对于整个城市居民的生活而言，则是有利的。

1月16日雅思大作文真题参考范文

老师笔记

01、People used to live in houses with huge outdoor areas like a garden or backyard, but this is no longer possible for many people as a result of the relentless development ofurbanisation. For individual city dwellers, this trend is not a good one, though for the city as a whole, it is positive.

人们过去住在有花园或后院等巨大户外区域的房子里，但由于城市化的不断发展，这对许多人来说已经不可能了。对于城市居民个人来说，这一趋势并不好，尽管对于整个城市来说，这是积极的。

解析

（1）本段利用对比的方法提出问题，然后直接给出自己的观点。

（2） As a result of 由于......

（3） Relentless 无情的

（4） Urbanisation 城镇化

02、With dwindled outdoor areas, people will find themselves confined to the limited number of indoor activities. If in the past they were able to engage in such activities as walking, gardening, weeding, and planting in their backyard, when they got back home from work, now what people can do is sitting in the sofa and watching TV. While being detrimental to their physical health, this will also make their life untolerably boring, especially for those who love to take care of flowers and plants or to take outdoor exercises.

随着室外区域的减少，人们会发现自己局限于有限的室内活动。如果过去下班回家后，他们能在后院从事散步、园艺、除草、种树等活动，现在人们能做的就是坐在沙发上看电视。这在不利于他们身体健康的同时，也会让他们的生活变得难以忍受的枯燥，尤其是那些喜欢照料花草或户外运动的人。

解析

（1）本段论证室外空间减少带来的坏的影响之一：活动减少带来身体问题。

（2） Dwindle 减少；变小

（3） Be confined to... 被局限于......

（4） Engage in 从事

03、Worse still, without enough outdoor spaces, people will not be able to find many opportunities to interact with each other. They will spend most of their off-work time isolated in their match-box of homes. As this goes on, they will grow more and more lonely and indifferent to their neighbors. This lack of soical life may result in many mental problems.

更糟糕的是，如果没有足够的户外空间，人们将无法找到许多相互交流的机会。他们大部分的下班时间都会被隔离在火柴盒般的家里。这样下去，他们会越来越孤独，对邻居越来越漠不关心。缺乏社会生活可能会导致许多精神问题。

解析

（1）本段讨论户外空间减少的另一个问题：导致互相隔离。

（2） Isolate 隔离

（3） Match-box of homes 火柴盒般的家

（4） Result in 导致

04、The disappearing outdoor space will do harm to the individual city dwellers both physically and psychologically, but it is necessary for the overall urban development. As more and more poeple rush into the cities, the government will have to address their housing and traffic issues. By reducing the outdoor areas, the government can build more houses and roads so as to meet the basic demands of all people.

户外空间的消失会对城市居民个体的身心健康造成危害，但这是城市整体发展的需要。随着越来越多的人涌入城市，单位将不得不解决他们的住房和交通问题。通过减少室外空间，单位可以建造更多的房屋和道路，以满足所有人的基本需求。

解析

（1）本段讨论减少户外空间对整个城市发展的必要性。

（2） Disappearing 逐渐消失的

（3） Overall 整体的

（4） Address 解决；应对

雅思高分范文

People used to live in houses with huge outdoor areas like a garden or backyard, but this is no longer possible for many people as a result of the relentless development of urbanisation. For individual city dwellers, this trend is not a good one, though for the city as a whole, it is positive.

With dwindled outdoor areas, people will find themselves confined to the limited number of indoor activities. If in the past they were able to engage in such activities as walking, gardening, weeding, and planting in their backyard, when they got back home from work, now what people can do is sitting in the sofa and watching TV. While being detrimental to their physical health, this will also make their life untolerably boring, especially for those who love to take care of flowers and plants or to take outdoor exercises.

Worse still, without enough outdoor spaces, people will not be able to find many opportunities to interact with each other. They will spend most of their off-work time isolated in their match-box of homes. As this goes on, they will grow more and more lonely and indifferent to their neighbors. This lack of soical life may result in many mental problems.

The disappearing outdoor space will do harm to the individual city dwellers both physically and psychologically, but it is necessary for the overall urban development. As more and more poeple rush into the cities, the government will have to address their housing and traffic issues. By reducing the outdoor areas, the government can build more houses and roads so as to meet the basic demands of all people.

以上就是新航道小编今天带来的雅思高分范文与解析了，同学们可以参考学习，为雅思备考做好准备，希望以上的内容对你有帮助，祝你雅思考试过过过！加油！

课程小结

昨天是愚人节，那些曾经玩过的整人游戏你还记得几个？你是否有中过招呢？给大家分享一个雅思口语part2话题，描述你决定不对朋友说实话的时刻，一起来看看愚弄朋友的经历如何描述吧！

雅思口语

Describe a time when you decided not to tell a friend the truth.

You should say:

When and where this happened

Who the friend was

Why you decided not to tell this friend the truth

And explain how you felt about not telling this friend the truth.

该话题参考文本

When mentioning a time when I didn’t tell a friend the truth, it reminds me of a funny story that happened on April Fools’ Day last year. We all know that April Fools’ Day is a holiday full of fun as we celebrate the day just by looking for any opportunity we can to play an elaborate prank on our friends. A lot of the time, the pranks involve telling somebody something outrageous or false and if they’re gullible enough to believe it, we can say “April fools” to let them know that they’re been had by the prank.

So last year, on April Fools’ Day, I was trying to fool my best friend Lisa with a quiz game. The quiz was quite simple, “Are there any penguins in the world that can actually fly?”. And the rule was if she could answer it correctly, I would pay her 100 RMB. If she failed, she needed to pay me 100 RMB. Certainly the answer is no and her answer was no as well. But I told her that her answer was false and showed her the trailer from the BBC explaining the discovery of flying penguins in Antarctica. My friend’s jaw dropped and she gave me 100 RMB reluctantly. I couldn’t help laughing when I got the money and then told my friend it was a joke, the trailer was fake news created by the BBC itself to fool all the audience on April Fools’ Day in 2008.

该话题关键词

1. play a joke/trick/prank on sb. 捉弄某人

2. gullible adj.容易受骗上当的

3. fool sb. (into doing sth.) 愚弄某人(做某事)

4. one’s jaw drops 惊讶得目瞪口呆

以上就是广州新航道此次为大家带来的雅思口语part2分享，如何描述你决定不对朋友说实话的时刻大家现在知道了吗？更多关于雅思考试的资讯与详情，可关注广州新航道雅思频道，或咨询广州新航道在线老师。

广州雅思6分培训

2019年6月1日雅思大作文题目：挽救动植物是否为时已晚?Human activities have negative effects on plant and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem. Others believe effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give your opinion. （2016/02/18）

雅思写作素材图

解析&审题

本题是2016年2月18日原题重现。

人类活动已经给动植物带来很多消极的影响，因此有人认为，我们现在才去保护动植物已经太晚了，而其他人则认为我们还可以采取有效措施来改进这种局面。

其实，双方都有道理。

一方面，人类已经在很大程度上破坏了自然生态环境，很多动植物都消失了；另一方面，我们的确又可以采取一些方法来补救，而且的确已经见到成效了。

最近，读到一则新闻，熊猫现在已经不是世界一级濒危动物了，这就是大家采取行动的结果。

接下来，给大家分享这篇雅思写作范文

7分范文
Human civilisation has largely destroyed the habitats of many plants and animals so that some species have disappeared entirely from the earth. This situation has caused a strong sense of pessimism among many people that it is already too late for us to do anything about it. Though people have enough reasons to hold this pessimistic view, I am still positive that we can save the situation by taking effective measures.

In the name of "development" and "civilisation", human beings have long ignored the interest of plants and animals. To build a city, for instance, they will not hesitate to cut all the trees in the area and erect numerous concrete buildings in their place. When the trees are gone, all the animals have to leave or die because they can no longer survive. As the urbanisation goes on ruthlessly throughout the world, plants and animals can find less and less space to live in. This situation is bad enough, and shows no positive sign of change.

Yet, this does not mean we are helpless. Though we can not stop the city from spreading altogether, we can create a favorable environment for plants and animals to thrive on. For example, in the center of the city, we can give large spaces for trees and other plants and leave animals living there the way they like. In fact, I have already seen that many cities are running this kind of special "animal parks" which imitate the natural habitats of plants and animals and do not allow people to intrude in. More important is, of course, that people should be educated to understand that human beings themselves would suffer if the entire ecological system were destroyed. Our own existence is so dependent on the plants and animals around us that if they die, we will die, too. With this understanding deep in mind, human beings will try their best to maintain a harmonious relationship with the natural world.

Over the past 5000 years of human development, we do have brought negative effects on plants and animals and the situation seems to be worsening. So, for the benefits of the nature and ourselves, we should act immediately. Though keeping balance between the natural protection and human development is never easy, we can always find a way out. It is never too late to take measures to change the situation, and the earlier, the better.

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