雅思口语考试中，考官对你的印象可以决定你这场考试的生与死，我们无法针对每个考官喜爱来回答问题，但有些雷区我们却必须尽量避免!那么，有哪些口语表达是雷区?我们大家还是一起来看看雅思培训老师的讲解吧。

雅思口语考试

01、说的越快就越显“牛”

或许是在平时讲英语的时候，我们在不太注意自己的说话速度，又或许有人习惯上讲话时用很快的语速，或者是由于平时看到的听到的大部分是American的英语，给人的感觉是流畅轻快，节奏感也很强，可是雅思口语的考官大部分是来自英国、新西兰、澳洲或者加拿大，对于他们来讲，语速是考量一个人语言素质和修养的关键因素，对于他们来说，较快的语速并不是表现良好沟通的方式，反而，平均的语速或者较慢的语速能够更加拉近彼此之间的距离，并产生些许好感，因此，控制好自己的语速和谈吐是口语表现中不可小视的问题。

02、拘谨的表现形成紧张氛围的“导火线”

雅思口语考试和大多数国际标准话考试不同，(例如托福就是机考)考官会亲自面试，并且考试形式是讨论加交流的形式，也就是说临场过程中，你的一举一动都在考官的注视中，那么过于拘谨或者紧张势必产生语言和肢体上的僵硬和迟钝，因此彼此之间的沟通没有得到有效的建立，你的表现一定会给考官留下不够良好的印象，影响你的口语成绩。这就是我们为什么一定要强调eye contact和smiling。

03、说长句就是好事

在评分标准中，对于语法和流利度以及连贯性两项中，都有对句型运用的语言概念在各项分数级别中做了不同程度和侧重的解释，一般来讲，在口语表达中，能够运用不同形式的句型和语法可以从一方面体现一个人的语言能力，可是对于高分级别的语言标准，需要说明的是不同形式的复合句的使用是建立在充分的信息依据和明确的语音特征基础之上的，包括自然停顿、重音、语气、升降调等诸多体现情感态度的表达因素，由此可以看出没有任何语气特征上的指示和表明，也没有任何可以过渡不同形式的复合句之间的连接成分，势必会让考官怀疑你是在背诵已经准备过的答案，或者像是没有情绪的机器人在朗读，这样势必会降低考官对于你communication skills的评价。

04、问到有关自己的问题必须说事实

在考官询问某些问题的时候，特别是在部分，所涉及到的话题通常是有关自己的个人情况和业余生活爱好等，由于之前准备不够充分，因此我们在回答某些实际问题时可以采用事实依据加以提炼或者修改、假设、虚构等方式让自己的表达符合问题提干要求和核心意思，考官不会考查你的内容是否属实，主要关心你是如何表达你的思想的方式，因此不要轻易直接回答你不清楚或者你不知道这样的答案。

05、交流是目的，语言本身是其次

聪明的你可能认为考官毕竟是人，因此和他搞好群众关系是临场发挥极为关键的事情，因此你会频繁的使用眼神交流法、微笑法、开玩笑法等博取考官对你好敢以期可能最终会得到比较满意的结果。但是，那些哦都是浮云，语言技术层面的工作才是最重要最急需做好的，相信一个满脸挂着微笑却只能进行只言片语的交流的考生，考官在评判的时候还是会客观地下结论，因此光做好表面功夫还是远远不够的。

06、考场外面我的“地盘”我做主

雅思口语考试那天有同学很早就来蹲点，为了收集当天考试的信息为第二天的考试做准备，其实这是一项以为危险的工作，因为口语考场纪律中严格要求考生不能在考场周围相互之间询问考试内容，因此你千万千万千万不要临时抱佛脚找现成答案，如果出现任何意外的话。。。请自求多福。

07、考试时间是几点就几点到

这个跟问题6又是完全opposite的情况了，雅思口语考试的顺序是根据报考考生的姓氏的首位大写字母顺序排列，由于考试当天多少会出现考生因各个原因无法参加考试如：如：准考证忘带、考试迟到、找不到考场、心理压力严重等，那么前面被叫到参加测试的学生的考试时间就会转移到下一个考生，因此大家一定得提前半小时到达考场，保证自己能够顺利地准时参加考试，避免上述状况的发生。

在多年的雅思写作教学过程中，唐老师发现众多烤鸭面临一个难解的尴尬局面：自己练习写了很多作文，但写作水平却不见实质性提升，最后考试成绩依然维持在以前的档次。这其实就涉及到作文修改的问题。唐老师的基本观点是：烤鸭写完习作后，一定要请行家修改自己的作文，指出问题及改进的办法。在这里，“行家”就显得尤其重要：如果修改仅仅发生在语言表达层面，而没有涉及思维层面，那么学生从修改里收获的进步就一定是非常有限的。为此，唐老师准备从本期开始，推出“雅思习作评改系列”，每期精选出一篇有典型意义的学生习作，并详细加以修改点评，希望读者能从唐老师的修改中得到有益的启发。本期给各位烤鸭准备的话题是关于“化学物质用于食品生产和保存的优劣势”。

题目

Do the dangers derived from the use of chemicals in food production and preservation outweigh the advantages?

学生习作

It has been claimed that people use several chemicals in the process of production and preservation. My view is that the disadvantages of using chemicals far outweigh the advantages.

It cannot be denied that people are more likely to use chemicals as a way to extend the time of food preservation, because it can help businessman gain more profits. For example, some agricultural products like vegetables and fruits are easily to become stale when they experience long-term transportation. If not adding some chemicals ingredients to protect food, merchants will suffer great economic damages.

However, there are several disadvantages of over-use chemicals. One the one hand, some of the chemicals ingredients cannot be resoled by digest system, which could effects human health. If chemicals remain in people body for a long time, it may cause diseases like cardiovascular, stomachache or lung disease etc. One the other hand, remain chemicals’ elements also damage natural environment. Some farmers use pesticides to protect agricultural products from destroying by harmful insects. However, the remains that cannot resole by ecosystem may pollute surrounding water and soil. To a large extent, if animal drink the water or eat the food, the may died by those poison food. What’s more, in the process of producing food, the contaminants that are made by factories directly pour into rivers, also cause habitat destruction, in this way, it account for the loss of biodiversity.

In conclusion, my view is that the disadvantages of this trend far outweigh advantages. If people control the use of chemicals, we will become healthier and also can enhance the human condition.

总体评价

评分：按照雅思写作评分标准的四个方面，唐老师给本习作的评分如下：Task response: 6.5; Coherence: 6.5; Vocabulary: 5.5; Grammar: 5.5。Overall: 6

总体评价：内容没有很大问题，相当通顺，逻辑和观点都比较清楚，但出现了一些基本的语法错误和用词错误，拉低了得分，相当遗憾！

建议：确保简单句子不出错误，用词方面一定要确保表达思想，不一定复杂。

逐句修改

第1段：It has been claimed that people use several chemicals in the process of production and preservation. My view is that the disadvantages of using chemicals far outweigh the advantages.

【唐老师修改】It has been claimed by many that there is nothing wrong using chemicals in food production and preservation. My view, however, is that the disadvantages of using chemicals far outweigh its advantages.

【唐老师点评】it has been claimed...后面应该接一个观点，但原文不是一个观点，只是一种现象。

第2段：It cannot be denied that people are more likely to use chemicals as a way to extend the time of food preservation, because it can help businessmangain more profits. For example, some agricultural products like vegetables and fruits are easily to become stale when they experience long-term transportation. If not adding some chemicals ingredients to protect food, merchants will suffer great economic damages.

【唐老师修改】It cannot be denied that people are more likely to use chemicals as a way to extend the time of food preservation, because it can help businessmen gain more profits. For example, some agricultural products like vegetables and fruits are easy to become stale when they experience long-term transportation. Without some chemical ingredients to protect them, merchants will suffer heavy economic losses.

【唐老师点评】本段错误不多，稍微改正，感觉可以冲7分了。(1) businessman是单数，此处宜做复数；（2）vegetables and fruits are easily to become stale...中的easily是副词，这里宜用形容词easy或者vegetables and fruits easily become stale...；（3）if not adding some chemical ingredients...是非常典型的中式表达，相当于“不如不添加一些化学成分”，但其实最合适的英文表达是“without some chemical ingredients” （如果没有一些化学成分”）；（4）economic damages表达不合适，宜为economic losses.

第3段：However, there are several disadvantages of over-use chemicals. One the one hand, some of the chemicals ingredients cannot be resoled by digest system, which could effects human health. If chemicals remain in people bodyfor a long time, it may cause diseases like cardiovascular, stomachache or lung disease. One the other hand, remain chemicals’ elements also damage natural environment. Some farmers use pesticides to protect agricultural products from destroying by harmful insects. However, the remains thatcannot resole by ecosystem may pollute surrounding water and soil. To a large extent, if animal drink the water or eat the food, they may died by those poison food. What’s more, in the process of producing food, the contaminants that are made by factories directly pour into rivers, also cause habitat destruction, in this way, it account for the loss of biodiversity.

【唐老师修改】However, there are several disadvantages of over-using chemicals. One the one hand, some chemicals cannot be resolved by digestive system, and cause harmful effects on human health. If chemicals remain in our body for a long time, they may lead to diseases like cardiovascular, stomachache or lung disease. One the other hand, chemicals also damage natural environment. For instance, some farmers use pesticides to protect agricultural products from harmful insects. However, the remains that cannot be resolved by ecosystem may pollute surrounding water and soil. If animals drink the water or eat the food, they may be poisoned. What’s more, in the process of producing food, the contaminants made by factories are directly poured into rivers, and cause habitat destruction, which accounts for the loss of biodiversity.

【唐老师点评】这个段落原文共143个单词，8个句子，却出现了多达12个基本语言错误！这样的作文，就算思想再深刻，得分也不可能高于6分。（1）over-use chemicals应为over using chemicals，或者chemical over-use（把over-use当作名词使用）；（2）some of the chemicals应为some chemicals。Some of the...指某一范围内的“一些”，some...则没有限定范围；（3）digest system应为digestive system（消化系统）；（4）effects应为affect（影响）；（5）people body应为our body; （6）it应为they，这里代词指代的是前文的复数chemicals。代词使用是中国英语学习者的一个很大的难题，经常出现错误。（7）remain chemicals’ elements似乎想表达“残留的化学成分”，但完全不符合规范，不如直接说“化学物质”（chemicals），考试中不要试图去表达不会表达的内容。（8）protect agricultural products from destroying by harmful insects应为...protect agricultural products from being destroyed by harmful insects，或者更简洁的...protect agricultural products from harmful insects. （9）cannot resolve应为被动语态cannot be resolved。（10）they may died by those poison food应为they may die from those poisoned food，但前文提及water 和food，因而这里仅说poisoned food也不合适，因此宜改为they may be poisoned。（11）...the contaminants that are made by factories directly pour into rivers中，主语是the contaminants，谓语是pour into rivers，两者是被动关系，因此应该是...the contaminants made by factories are directly poured into rivers。（12）...in this way, it account for the loss of biodiversity中it指代不明。

第4段：In conclusion, my view is that the disadvantages of this trend far outweigh advantages. If people control the use of chemicals, we will become healthier and also can enhance the human condition.

【唐老师修改】In conclusion, the disadvantages of chemical use in food production and preservation far outweigh the advantages. Though it helps increase profits for businesses, it may cause great dangers to our life as well as the environment. If we control the use of chemicals, we will become healthier and our living conditions will also be improved.

【唐老师点评】结尾没有总结出全文观点，修改文黑体字增加了一句总结观点。最后一句中，people, we, human condition不停转换，代词游离不定，让人着急，可以统一为人称。