雅思写作有大小作文两篇，雅思小作文一般考的题型就是图表题，这对于备考中的同学们来说方向也更明确。要想写出一篇好的作文，除了要有好的基础，平时的练习也是少不了的，其中参考高分范文也是帮助提升的方法之一，下面小编要为大家带来的分享就是雅思（数据型）小作文高分范文。

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本场小作文高分范文

The table given shows the total number of cruise passengers in the UK in two years, which are 1995 and 2003. The bars are an illustration of thebreakdown of the two years’ numbers by age.

There were roughly 3,000 more passengers in 2003 than in 1995, when the number was 99,575. ← 比较级是典型的体现比较概念的句型。分组：以蓝黄柱的高低 → Exceptin the 25-34 group and the 35-44 group, the year of 2003 witnessed greater numbers of passengers in the other age groups, 根据主句的信息继续写 → and the group consisting of people aged under 24 is noteworthy, as passengers in 2003, whose number is 10,000, are nearly twice as many as passengers in 1995. ← 一篇有一个长句即可。A noticeable gap can also be found in the next two older groups;however, there was an opposite case that the year of 1995 received obviously more passengers than the year of 2003. In addition, older passengers were more than their younger counterparts in both of the two years. The greater numbers were significant in the two oldest groups, with the number of passengers surging [surge]to as large as 23,000 in the 55-64 group and 35,000 in the 65-and-plus group.

1. 内容注意：数据的 分组 和 取舍。

2. 语法和句型注意：全篇的 不同的状语形式 和 非限定性定语从句 的交替使用；主语的多样性。

3. 词汇注意：表示程度的形容词和副词。

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The lines in the two graphs are illustrations of the visits made by French and American vacationers and business visitors to the UK throughout a year.

In terms of the holiday visits, the general pattern is that the UK receivedmarkedly more French vacationers' visits than those of American vacationers.← 表语从句。写作步骤：上一句总写宏观后开始细化： With the number of French vacationers' visits increasing faster, ← 独立主格结构作状语表方式。 the gap keeping widening during the first quarter. It stabilized in the next two quarters, and the third quarter witnessed the respective peaks of the two numbers of visits – 3 million (m.) and 1.7m. Afterwards, both numbers of visits slid [slide] quickly to the original levels (0.5m and 0.7m).

Likewise, French travelers made more visits for the business purposethan American visitors; however, the numbers of visits made by the two groups had identical trends. 写作步骤：在既然提及trends,那就把trends说明白： To be specific, despite the slip during the middle of the year, both numbers increased, from 0.2m to 0.48m and 0.1m to 0.3m respectively. Meanwhile, it is noteworthy that the difference was within a narrow range of 0.1m to 0.2m constantly over the year.

Overall, the year saw that the UK received more holiday visits than the business visits and that the French made more visits than Americans. ← 宾语从句，注意平行。

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在雅思写作中，你们是否有遇到这样的一些困扰：只会写一些简单的短句，写不出长句子，更写不出高分复杂句子，导致写作的分数一直不尽人意。那么，本次文章撰写就是帮助大家学会如何在雅思写作中写出高分复杂句。

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首先必须明确的是，长句优先原则和句型多变原则是写出高分复杂句子的两大原则。对于长句优先原则，咱们可以借助两种方法来实现：(1)定语从句和(2)并列结构。

(1)定语从句的使用方法：任何一个名词后面都可以加上一个定语从句对之进行解释。

例1：Honest merchants (诚信的商家)will suffer a great destruction. 本句讲假冒伪劣商品的危害，“烤鸭宝宝们”如果想把这个句子写成高分复杂句，那么应该怎么写呢?我们可以借助两个步骤实现：Step 1: 找出句子中的名词;Step 2: 在名词后加定语从句。首先我们可以找到这个句子中的名词为 honest merchants;destruction。然后咱们可以尝试在这些名词后面加上定语从句来修饰补充名词的内容，大家可以思考一下什么是诚信的商家呢?这类商家往往具备什么样的属性特征呢?仔细思考后，咱们可以这样添加：一些遵守规章制度和生产高质量产品的Honest merchants。那么，第二个名词destruction，什么样的损失呢，咱们可以在后面补充“对他们生产不利的损失”。确定了这两步，咱们就可以写出这样的句子：Honest merchants, who observe rules and regulations and produce high-quality goods, will suffer a great destruction which is detrimental to their production. 大家看这个句子，是不是瞬间就高分亮点了，且句子的内容更加充实具体。

例2：Factories have discharged gas and liquid. 本句讲工厂排放废气和废水。怎么把这个简单句升级变成高分复杂句呢，大家同样可以借助咱们说的两个步骤：Step 1: 找出句子中的名词;Step 2: 在名词后加定语从句。首先，不难确定本句中的名词为 factories, gas and liquid，然后咱们可以尝试在这些名词后加定语从句去修饰和限定属性。Factories：给老板带来巨大利润的工厂;gas and liquid：会给周边环境带来负面影响的汽油和液体。于是，这个句子咱们可以升级为：Factories, which bring their owners huge profits, have discharged gas and liquid that may exert a seriously negative influence on the surrounding environment.

(2)并列结构的使用方法：在连词and前后加上意思相近，结构相同的短语或者单词。例1：取得成功(Achieve great success)咱们可以在这个基础上加上跟“取得成功”这个短语意思相近，结构相同的短语。如“实现目标”、“克服困难”，于是咱们可以把上面这个句子升级为：Achieve great success and attain one’s goals 或者Achieve great success and overcome several difficulties. 例2：开拓视野(Broaden one’s horizons)咱们可以在这个基础上加上跟“开拓视野”这个短语意思相近，结构相同的短语。如“充实心智”、“塑造心智”，于是咱们可以把上面这个句子升级为：Broaden one’s horizons and enrich one’s mind或者Broaden one’s horizons and shape one’s mind.

其次，咱们来看写出高分复杂句子的第二个原则--句型多变原则。这里有五种策略可以帮助咱们实现句型多变：(1)人称句与无人称句之间的转换;(2)肯定句与否定句的转换;(3)主动句与被动句的转换;(4)动词和名词的转换;(5)短句子与长句子的转换。

(1)人称句与无人称句之间的转换

下面大家尝试着翻译这个句子：很多人认为，在中国，控制人口数量是非常有必要的。相信不少“烤鸭”会给出以下版本，即Many people think that birth control is quite necessary in China. 大家会发现这个句子的英文翻译，本身没有什么问题，但是不足以满足GRA的高分需求。句子中的“很多人认为”，咱们是真的在强调这个人数的多少吗?人数重要吗?答案是否定的，那么咱们是否可以把这个句子改写成无人称的主语呢，随后咱们可以将这个句子升级为：It is widely thought that birth control is quite necessary in China. 再如：Many Chinese people have gone to the United States in the past 15 years. 这个句子的人称主语，咱们也可以改成无人称主语，实现句式的多样性，尝试着物化生命力，咱们就可以写出这个句子：The past 15 years have brought many Chinese people to the United States.

(2)肯定句与否定句的转换

怎么实现肯定句与否定句的转换呢，相信大家一定知道：双重否定表肯定吧，那么咱们来看题。例：每个孩子都想赚些零花钱来帮助交付高额的大学费用。这个句子的翻译，很多“雅思宝宝”都会给我这个句子：Every child wants to earn some pocket money to cover the high college cost. 句子本身写作也没有什么问题，但是咱们可以尝试着换中说法，如：There is no child who does not want to earn some pocket money to help cover the high college cost.

(3)主动句与被动句的转换

很多中国的“烤鸭们”，由于受中式思维的影响，在写作中习惯性地会写主动语态，例：由于社会需要，出现了很多夜校。很多学生的书写版本为：There appear many evening schools because of social demands. 句子没什么问题，但是咱们是不是也可以改写为被动语态来体现句子表达的多样性呢，如：Many evening schools are called into existence by social demands.

(4)动词和名词的转换

如果各位“烤鸭们”私下有阅读英文名著的习惯，大家就不难发现，在地道的英语表达中，老外会优先“名词”来表达，因为英文中名词才是包括具体信息的词，其信息密度比动词大。对于这个句子：“这种生活方式已经越来越流行，越来越多的年轻人已经接受这种生活方式。”之前很多同学会给我这个版本：The style of living has become more and more popular and accepted by more and more young people. 但是，考官给出的参考句是这样的：The style of living has found its growing popularity and acceptance among young people.

(5)短句子与长句子的转换

实现句型多样，各位考生们还可以适当地转换使用短句子和长句子。如下面这个句子：“青少年由于课业负担重并在同伴的鼓励下去吸烟。在这种情况下，尽快觉得不对，他们还是经常这么做。” 很多宝宝们的句子是Teenagers are pressured by school work and they are also encouraged by their peers. Under such circumstances, they often resort to smoking, though sometimes they feel a little guilty. 咱们可以改换成分词的高分复杂句子：Pressured by school work and encouraged by their peers, teenagers often resort to smoking, though they feel a little guilty sometimes.

综上所述，写出高分复杂句子的两大原则：长句优先原则和句型多变原则。希望这两个原则可以帮助各位“烤鸭宝宝们”在雅思写作中能够写出高分复杂句子，提高雅思分数，早日实现出国梦,!