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今天的主题是“柱图”。以2019年6月13日的真题为例,2019年6月13日真题,国内A类:柱图 The charts below show the number of magazines sold per person by 5 countries in 2000 and 2010, with projected number for 2020.
2019年6月13日雅思写作柱图
千万不可以当成线图来写,因为时间不连续
雅思高分范文及解析1
In the chart, two historical years and a foreseeable year are investigated in terms of the magazine sales per individual in 5 countries – A, B, C, D, and E.
永远不要忘记分组:
Countries A, B and C一组:下降
亘古不变的写作法:总——分原则
In A, B and C, the year of 2010 saw a slight fall, as it is compared with the year of 2000「用来表述比较关系的状语要写清楚」, and it is forecast that a drop will occur, on the 2010’s level, 「用来表述比较关系的定语要写清楚」in the year of 2020. ← 总,分 → The sales were highest in A and in 2000, and lowest sales is likely to be in C by the time of 2020; however, the sales will stay above an annual number of 30.
分组:Countries D and E一组
By stark 「表示程度的形容词是小作文的词汇关键」 contrast, the popularity of magazines increased in D and E in 2010, as the sales grew by 5. The anticipation for 2020「于是后面可以用will」suggests that D’s number will be greater than in 2010, and E will witness a decrease on the 2010’s level 「用来表述比较关系的定语要写清楚」. In addition, it is notable that these two countries had significantly lower sales (approx. 20 and 10 respectively) than A, B or C.
总结的内容写笼统
Overall, A, B and C were vastly different from D and E as we look at the sales and the pattern of change, and the difference is likely to remain.
200 words,本文的信息组织方式是本文偏长的原因
高分范文及解析2
This bar chart shows how many magazines were sold in 2000 and 2010 per person in five countries – A, B, C, D, and E – with the estimates for 2020.
“历史和将来”写法:先写历史情况,再写将来预测
“历史”段落
A had the highest sales of magazines in the two historical years, followed by B and C. 「排序(描述数据之间的关系)写法:适合于数值靠近的项目之间」In A, the respective sales were 48 and 45, and in B and C, the numbers ranged between 35 and 40. D and E witnessed significantly lower sales, as their sales of magazines were around 20 and 10 in the two years. 「用状语从句也可以用来描述数据情况,不要依赖定语从句,并且,用状语从句描述时,有“事件感”」
不要机械罗列数据,而是总结性的描述pattern
通常只描述max.和min.
“将来”段落
According to the anticipation, the sales of magazines will, in four of the five countries, decrease compared with those in 2010. In the four countries, the estimated sales figures for 2020 are only slightly smaller. The situation in D will be different. 「用句子描述信息之间的逻辑关系,而不拘泥于短语形式的逻辑连接」The year of 2020 will see increased sales compared with those of 2010.
句子主语要多样 不要机械罗列数据
总结的时候,笼统写为宜
Overall, each of the countries had stable sales of magazines, despite the changes, and in the future year, the number will not be markedly different.
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拱墅区环球雅思培训
在雅思口语考试的时候,会出现一些话题,有哪些话题会经常出现在Part2部分呢?接下来一起来看看关于Park的话题吧。
雅思口语素材图
1、spectacular waterfalls 壮观的瀑布
Others come to walk in the mountains, to see the spectacular waterfalls or to bathe in thehot water pools. 另外一些人则是到山里来走一走,看看那些蔚为壮观的瀑布,或者在温水池里泡个澡。
2、reach so high 很高
The trees there reach so high that they remind me of the skyscrapers in Beijing. 这里的树很高,让我想起北京的摩天大厦。
3、rolling hills 平稳的小山
The scenic area – characterised by forested, rolling hills and a large river – is a two-hour drive from New York City. 该风景区有着茂密的森林,起伏的丘陵和一条大河,距市中心有两小时的车程。
4、well-trimmed 枝叶修剪整齐的
The well-trimmed trees really appeal to me. 这些枝叶修剪整齐的树真的让我喜欢。
5、sweep across the lake 掠过湖面
A couple of chirping birds sweep across the lake. 几只鸣叫的鸟掠过水面。
6、neatly-mowed 草坪修剪
The lawn is neatly-mowed. 这个草坪修剪整齐。